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Friday 4 March 2011

Evaluation
Part Six

Part Six How did you attract/address your audience?

I think that we have defiantly reached out target audience as the final product is just how we wanted it to be and more males have commented on how they like it then females, but also because it is action packed and shows a lot of mischief.
When planning our production we were thinking about how the audience would be drawn in and we new that action and suspicion would draw them in and make them want to watch more. So when planning we knew that we would have to involve drugs and a suspicious character to whom was being watched and investigated. We changed it a couple of times but we have kept the same perspective in mind the whole way throughout.
The first quote that I will be using is one by the user 'MrFlynners99' and this is the comment that he left:
'Very good work, well done, particularly liked the way of introducing the characters in the sane style gut Ritchie does in Snatch, good editing, music and cinematography well done.'
From this feedback we can see that he liked the editing, music and cinematography. We spent a lot of time editing and doing lots of jump cute to make it look faster and more up beat, with the music we tried to get a Chinese based song which we were successful in and the cinematography we tried to be experimental with the camera shots and make it look more interesting.
Here is another quote by 'CallMeDannyyy7':
'I really like the footage you have used of China, happy that it is original and shot by a member of your group.
- The footage you have used of the warehouse is also very good.
-The titles always come in the same place what I might change and have some appear at the bottom of the screen as with them being in the top corner it draws attention away from the screen.
Overall a really good title sequence, good idea and good footage!
Well done!'
By using the original footage from Hong Kong that was filmed by one of our group members it gave it a more triad feel for the location and the reality of it. Also as it isn't a landscape that we see everyday it is new and fresh to the eye. The criticism about the titles is helpful for next time and also it is good to get criticism at times so that we can progress and make it better. Overall I think that most people were attracted to the music and the beginning location.
According to audience feedback we were very successful in our editing and many people said that they really liked the part where the triad and a drug dealer are making a transaction and we make it so it seems there are photos being taken by using stills and the sound of a photo being taken. Overall I think that the audience were most pleased with our editing and the places in which we filmed.
I think that according to the audience feedback the only thing that they pointed out was the title:
'I didn't really get why it was called closure... But I did want to keep watching it.'
We also in the previous comment by 'CallMeDannyyy7' the credits were't positioned very well, so overall it seems that our titles and the name of our product wasn't quite right.
Overall I think our biggest problem were the credits and that if we were to go back into it we would improve them by putting them in different places and try not to keep them at the top.

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